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Here Comes the Water
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Here Comes the Water |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Here comes the water, I'll survive the emotional slaughter. With Demons dreaming, And Angels are screaming. Here comes the water... You've redefined me yet once more, And it's you I do adore. I have become cumbersome to myself, Forever told to "know thyself". And here comes the water... Found when I was lost, Keep you by my side no matter the cost. Here comes the water... To wash away my sins, Look beneath the needles and pins. Here comes the water... Balance between two worlds one with arrow one cross, In you never finding any loss. And here comes the water... Take me away... The fear I see when I look in your eyes |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great write, and really good use of repetitive verse.  ......jo |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
thank ya i appreciate it  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kiddo I think this is your best one yet |
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