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Courageous |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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As does the single blade amongst the mown, I stand in wait a harkening of souls. Souls once riveted to the ground that awaited their step as fear lay heavily upon untrodden limbs. Limbs that shook unmercifully in the wait as eyes spoke of yesterday’s son, holding close to a mother’s breast, hungering for comfort and warmth. Fear not child, for on this day thy name shall ne’er be lost amongst the sands that swirl the hourglass. On this day a hand shall rest upon the shivering flesh of one’s shoulder, bringing forth a flowing well of bravery which shall flood the earth and spread amongst the timid, the meek who await but one to take bravery’s step into the waiting waters. Come, take the hand of freedom, quell the tide of evil. Plant democracy’s seed amongst the hallowed fields. Walk the path of gallantry.....as your father’s fathers have done time and again across the ages. For at the journey’s end...they await you with open arms and hearts that shall beat mightily on...forever. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Well done could not do it better myself.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"For at the journey’s end...they await you with open arms and hearts that shall beat mightily on...forever." Barry..your writing has taken on a deeper stronger quality... Your ability as a writer continues to grow in leaps and bounds... Marvelous write m'friend. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bravo! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
My, my, this stirs the heart. Inspiring.  SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was so inspirational, Barry, and so in sync with the events of this week.  ...jo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Fear not child, for on this day thy name shall ne’er be lost amongst the sands that swirl the hourglass Wonderful write dear Magnus. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A magnficent write in Magnus tradition. Patricia |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Magnus, You've gifted us with a very meaningful and timely poem, full of inspiration. Thanks for your generosity. Sadelite |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Barry, Your poem was right up my alley. I find this a beautiful tribute to those standing in defiance of terror and tyrany and rising in defense of Democracy, freedom, and principle. These heroes we remember, everyone of them, you and I, in words that are never cheapened in hasty creation. We both are inspired by the same ideals, I think. It is so refreshing to find others who lament, who appreciate, who rise in defense of liberty, who are inspired by trialed sovereignty and the heroes spirit not forgotten. May God bless you for what you have shared here. It was a moving tribute to what is most important to me. If you really feel the way I do about such issues, I would encourage you to read, whenever you have a moment, some of my posts. We are of the same cloth my friend. Kevin |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry fine, dear man! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching as only you can touch |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Barry, this brought tears to my heart...amazingly beautiful. I cry at weddings, when music touches my soul, the first time I saw a baby foal, our held a new born puppy, first born to my dog...when people are happy and excited, and to words as yours, so beautiful, insightful and so honest....how precious and profound. Thank you P.S. You poets in Passions Amaze me, I love your work, your respect for others work, the sharing of tears and joy, and the courtesy you all display to others...PIP is a place where God lives....thank you |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I stand in wait a harkening of souls. ~*~ Now, you know, as well as I, that you put that word in there just for me.  And it kept me, the whole way through. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
To understand and write of such courage, one must possess it as well!  ~ and the talent to convey it as 'mag'nificently as you have done!!!  EA |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Wonderful writing, as usual. It's nice to see you again and I hope you are well. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a tremendous write...applause.... |
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