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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2004-06-12 09:08 AM




sunrise shattered sleep

body aching from its pains

life claims victory

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Martie
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1 posted 2004-06-12 10:18 AM


icebox

life claims victory!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-06-12 10:41 AM


icebox
LOL I would have said, death claims victory.

Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-06-12 12:42 PM


sunrise shattered sleep -- I really like this.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-06-12 12:51 PM


that's me today...good one
*s
M

iliana
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5 posted 2004-06-12 08:43 PM


"sunrise shattered sleep"

Great use of imagery and paradox.  Enjoyed.  Know what you mean and I know you know I know.    

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2004-06-21 03:13 PM


Wouldn't it be great if we could wake with a massage?

Well...

Nevermind.


"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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7 posted 2004-06-21 03:30 PM


"life claims victory"

~ and may it ever so be!

Warm hug,
EA

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