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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
haunting.... love the vocab in this Dawn... cool presentation as well.  When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing once again Dawn.... Going back for another read of this keeper. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was so overwhelming. You know who this made me think of, no doubt. Excellent, muted, excellent.  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent!! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Overwhelming indeed, this aches m'friend, but as always...so wonderfully written and wonderfully presented.  Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
smile for the camera... |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
I really enjoyed this poem. It was eloquently written with close attention to wasted words. How do I know this? Simply because there were no wasted words...every one of them appointed in perfection. Kevin |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
par excellence -- sometimes I wonder what sparks an inspiration such as this, the use of a marionnette? I must try stretching a bit more. This inspires me to think outside my ususal box. SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
Awsome piece there buddy somehow i don't think i will look at puppets the same ever again .... It's not the blindfold that blinds you, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
this is very creatively written with much power; thought provoking... Sadelite |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I would hope a well placed swipe with a keen edge would leave this marionette standing free. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I like Ed's response, Dawn... wonderful writing, as aways M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ACK!!! Get out of my mirror! LOL... very good, Dawn... very good! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful write... Wonderful!! TD |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
This makes you think - how many people are gaped at while being pulled on by our culture's invisible strings? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely, so sad and bittersweet amazingly brilliant, written very well Thank you for sharing... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gawd Dawn, this is soooo beautiful. Very well done... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow and damn....this aches so beautifully. Love the presentation. Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'Twould be a shame if you were ever truly "muted"! You speak so well thru' your poetry!  A very fine write, Dear Dawn!!! Love & Light, Linda |
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