Open Poetry #32 |
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Cheyenna Wine |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside ![]() |
~*~ I have scaled the rise climbing mountains, one after another turning away and slightly revised. Landing upon a peaceful plateau, rows of contrast pour from the sun, a private vintage bottled up tight. Winding around grapevines pruned and distilled with careful attention, a harvest without clinging labeled Cheyenna. Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Lovely, simply lovely, Bluesy gal. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
*Hugs* Helen dear, and thank you~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
been looking for you... hoping everything is ok love and miss you ![]() M |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. Lovely Bluesylady !! hugging you in thoughts, Chris |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely dear Lori.. My favourite stanza is the same as my sisters. ~Smiles & Hugs Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
breathlessy and bluelessly loverly so nice to see your breeze in again blondie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. ====================== looks like your vacation was good for your muse...lovely write poetess Lori-girl. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A lovely vintage, Bluesy... |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Pretty, pretty....and no blues in it....I like that very much. Glad to see one from you -- I've been wondering when we'd get to see the next one! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Winding around grapevines pruned and distilled with careful attention, a harvest without clinging labeled Cheyenna." Smiling at this one Bluesy... ![]() |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful, Lori. I especially like this ending... draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. Hugs, sweet lady, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OH Lori, this is perfection and it dang sure is good to see your words again hon. Have missed you ![]() |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Everything about this was beautiful , hey bluesy love that plateau you are on Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Save that cork for me bluesy....lol, just kidding. Great write -- I love it! ![]() |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you good poet friends. I appreciate it so much and aplogize for not being around lately. Real life is what it is, and I miss my time here. Hugs, and happy summer days to you~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Like a fine wine dapples in gold draping the landscape completes the bouquet. My arm in your arms, breathing, breathing. Smiling at ya Ms Blues. Love this. Maree ![]() The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
I thought this was a beautiful poem, fluid, with great imagery, worthy of printed pages. Kevin |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The significance of grapes and the vine weave wonder into innocense... Another great write. TD |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori Lovely positive flow to this, my friend. Good to see you! ![]() |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Are we there yet??? ![]() |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You paint very well Bluesy....I'm sorry I haven't given you many comments lately, for you always have deserved them...good ones.. always good ones.. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Bluesy, It's great to read your poetry again-I've missed you. It sounds like the retreat has been refreshing. I'm happy for you. I'll be looking forward to our next visit. Sadelite |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I think maybe we just keep this one on top for a while longer...that's where it belongs, and I always believe in posting a poem where it belongs....   ![]() ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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