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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-06-11 12:46 PM


Only of Her

I was trying to be good,
I honestly believed that I could,
but in a lusty moment of the
other day I lost my way.
Felt like being shot with an uzi,
when my heart fell hard for Suzi.
When lips came unglued, roses
bled red, and our lips did too.
Like a vampire savagely kissing me,
like an angel touching me tenderly.
She touched me, she touched me deep.
Now at night I think only of her in
the moments before I fall into sleep.
And I want to hold her
and I want to kiss her,
and I miss her,
and I miss her.
And my heart, my heart is
taking me to places where
I dare not to go.
But I will,
I know,
I know.

JamesLee
June10
2004
Only her.

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2004-06-11 12:48 PM


happens to the best of us, good write.
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2004-06-11 01:25 AM


Sounds like you're going there.  Good one, JamesLee.   .....jo
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-06-11 01:34 AM


Thanks Tequilia and iliana for the nice responses...I'm crazy about my girlfriend.
Only me, only her, she takes me up, she takes me down...she's all over my heart, my dreams, my desires...like a vamp, like an angel...who could ask for anything more...not me...James

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