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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-06-10 10:45 AM


Pleased I am, afterthoughts shaping years
Cherished memorabilia, intimate souvenirs
Belonging slow passions widen
Thoughts staring at unnoticed heartbeats
Like sunbeams freezing upon undressed skin
Humanity’s reflective place and pastime
Lover’s ears do not retire
Timeless love weds
Blue skies hover our island
Clear sea of thoughts
Freelance landlords
Orange moons peeping through forest trees
There was a difference you and me
In you, for you, with you
I wanted to be there, regardless
Now instead of you
It is only me, and afterthoughts...
shaping years


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2004-06-10 11:01 AM


I wanted to be there, regardless
Now instead of you
It is only me, and afterthoughts...
shaping years

very touching and can apply to my life in  several ways,Lee

hugs
M

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-06-10 11:07 AM


The clear statements that allow us to see the shape of a wonderous heart...what an elegant style you have LeeJ.
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-06-10 12:58 PM


you always paint a picture for the reader

I love to see the world through your words

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-06-11 12:54 PM


Luscious...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2004-06-11 01:35 AM


LeeJ -- ....we perceive things so differently at different times in our lives.  Sad, but lovely.  
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