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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-06-10 05:31 AM


A Colorless Watch

Not sure if I will make it through
the finality of it all.
The pressure increases its volume
as the fairy tale begins to wind down.

Mind chaos, swirling its calendar
into a "which day is this" feeling.
Limited affection to be exchanged
as touch becomes crucial
and only the eyes can speak
of what little light is left.

And the dreading of
what is black and white
fills the air.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-06-10 06:56 AM


as touch becomes crucial
and only the eyes can speak
of what little light is left.


Sending lotsa hugs your way...good inspiration and vibes are coming your way

Love, Lee J.

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
2 posted 2004-06-10 12:12 PM


DearestFriendieGal~
I LOVE YOU ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-06-10 12:15 PM


Maureen?

Here lady--touch the screen right here:

           X


My thoughts and prayers are with you.

and find some time to celebrate your birthday, will ya?

Hugs and love,

k

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-06-10 12:17 PM


Hugs M...
TD

bslicker
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state of mind
5 posted 2004-06-10 12:23 PM


Godd write M
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-10 12:45 PM


you will make it through

you will

Sadelite
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7 posted 2004-06-10 12:51 PM


a hug sent... wishing you the best.  Your poem is touching.
                  Sadelite

Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion
8 posted 2004-06-10 04:02 PM


times get rough, youll make it through

The wonder of the world is gone I know for sure All the wonder that I want I found in her As a hole becomes a part that strikes a burn And no flame re

Ericc
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9 posted 2004-06-10 04:13 PM


Wow...!!!

Eric

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