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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-06-09 09:31 AM

Words have not failed me
My muse sits himself right here
Still, I am adrift

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-06-09 09:34 AM

Sunshine
A drifting muse sounds good to me.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2004-06-09 09:47 AM

green tufts of grass slant
as the eye-shaped lake blinks twice
the ripple affects

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

3 posted 2004-06-09 09:48 AM

She fished with her muse in a skiff in the Gulf Stream......

Remember.....your muse has a muse -- you. Without you, he can't create a thing. Give him the good stuff! Grab the nearest Billy Collins book you can find and read a bit.....

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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2004-06-09 09:50 AM

Short, sweet and a pleasure to read.

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-06-09 10:08 AM

Silence laps dry shore
too many words in passing
leave without a mark

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-06-09 10:13 AM

mmm hmmmm
*nodding*

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

7 posted 2004-06-09 10:16 AM

gotcha there...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-06-09 10:29 AM

beautiful verbage, as all of yours are...lovely thoughts dear lady!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2004-06-09 12:13 PM

Boy, do I know where you are comin' from dear lady!

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2004-06-09 02:16 PM

Perfect.

Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-06-09 02:54 PM

yep...pondering this

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2004-06-09 03:35 PM

Karilea

I sure do understand this!

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

13 posted 2004-06-09 04:13 PM

Heh, know the feeling.

Muse perched in a tree
crouching approach on cat’s feet —
leaves waving good-bye

CG

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

14 posted 2004-06-09 04:24 PM

You can take stillness and make it move with your beautiful use of syllables and meaning as you did right here. Enjoyed.

....jo

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

15 posted 2004-06-09 04:27 PM

intresting

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

16 posted 2004-06-09 05:04 PM

S'okay. We all need "adrift" time.

I like to kickstart mine by getting out and going for a walk somewhere. Change of scenery.

Corinne

kayjay
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since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

17 posted 2004-06-10 11:41 AM

Winddrift wets my face
The seas I've sailed reflect my life
The change is endless

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

18 posted 2004-06-10 12:52 PM

and me...my muse has set itself adrift.....*smile* course with what I have been posting of late, I might hope it took a one way ticket with it

this is wonderful lady

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

19 posted 2004-06-10 04:08 PM

soft and aching, in so few.

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