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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-06-09 09:31 AM




Words have not failed me
My muse sits himself right here
Still, I am adrift

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-09 09:34 AM


Sunshine
A drifting muse sounds good to me.

Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2004-06-09 09:47 AM



green tufts of grass slant
as the eye-shaped lake blinks twice
the ripple affects

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3 posted 2004-06-09 09:48 AM


She fished with her muse in a skiff in the Gulf Stream......


Remember.....your muse has a muse -- you. Without you, he can't create a thing. Give him the good stuff! Grab the nearest Billy Collins book you can find and read a bit.....

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4 posted 2004-06-09 09:50 AM


Short, sweet and a pleasure to read.
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5 posted 2004-06-09 10:08 AM


Silence laps dry shore
too many words in passing
leave without a mark

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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6 posted 2004-06-09 10:13 AM


mmm hmmmm
*nodding*

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7 posted 2004-06-09 10:16 AM


gotcha there...
      

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8 posted 2004-06-09 10:29 AM


beautiful verbage, as all of yours are...lovely thoughts dear lady!
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9 posted 2004-06-09 12:13 PM


Boy, do I know where you are comin' from dear lady!

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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10 posted 2004-06-09 02:16 PM


Perfect.

Eric

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11 posted 2004-06-09 02:54 PM


yep...pondering this
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12 posted 2004-06-09 03:35 PM


Karilea

I sure do understand this!  

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13 posted 2004-06-09 04:13 PM



Heh, know the feeling.

Muse perched in a tree
crouching approach on cat’s feet —
leaves waving good-bye



CG

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14 posted 2004-06-09 04:24 PM


You can take stillness and make it move with your beautiful use of syllables and meaning as you did right here.  Enjoyed.   ....jo
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15 posted 2004-06-09 04:27 PM


intresting
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16 posted 2004-06-09 05:04 PM


S'okay. We all need "adrift" time.


I like to kickstart mine by getting out and going for a walk somewhere. Change of scenery.


Corinne

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17 posted 2004-06-10 11:41 AM


Winddrift wets my face
The seas I've sailed reflect my life
The change is endless

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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18 posted 2004-06-10 12:52 PM


and me...my muse has set itself adrift.....*smile* course with what I have been posting of late, I might hope it took a one way ticket with it
this is wonderful lady

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19 posted 2004-06-10 04:08 PM


soft and aching, in so few.


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