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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-06-10 04:34 AM


Can

Love can grow
fast or slow,
near or far
wherever you are.
Love can grow
in my heart,
in her heart,
together or apart.
Love can grow
when you know,
don't let go.
When two care
love can grow.

JamesLee
June09
2004

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-06-10 04:37 AM


yes...it can if you don't let go
Tequilia_Sunrise
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2 posted 2004-06-10 04:40 AM


very true, if you both have the will. always very much enjoyed james.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-06-10 04:59 AM


Thank you passing shadows and Tequilia for the lovely responses...love is a fascinating thing...the way it can grab your heart...James
LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-06-10 07:42 AM


yup, tis true, butcha both gotta go the distance which sometimes isn't all that fun, but in the end, when you both sit down and talk about it, letting all go and starting again, much more in tune with each other, well, it's like a piano, every once in a while it needs tuning, so everything is in sync again.  

Enjoyed!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-06-11 12:12 PM


Right Lee J...I have a problem with that going the distance part...either I don't want to or they don't want too...often as time goes by you find out how totally uncompatable you are...something it takes time to figure out...I really have good feelings about this one...but can she honestly say the same thing...I can...James
ParisGrl
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6 posted 2004-06-15 02:38 PM


James,

Great Poem!  I very much enjoyed it.  I'm going through the same thing myself.  I hope it works out for you.

~Laura~

Ericc
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7 posted 2004-06-15 04:25 PM


True...and wonderfuly
said.

Eric

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