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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-06-09 03:17 PM


Stands with a Fist

New discovery pounced on me
I screamed grimacing & kicking,
“Get away from me”!
I wasn’t ready to be courageous
After all, it must be mutual?


Catch me if you Can


squza me, just being silly

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-06-09 03:19 PM


Saw the title...

first thought that came to me, of course, was Dances with Wolves...

but cute is good, too!

Sadelite
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2 posted 2004-06-09 03:43 PM


Fun one, Lee, even if it might have a twinge of seriousness.
          

Bonnie j
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3 posted 2004-06-09 05:33 PM


The first thought that came to mind was a
BIG hairy spider was crawling down your leg.
You scream, forget courage. LOL
Your Buddy
BonBon

Tequilia_Sunrise
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4 posted 2004-06-09 06:10 PM


change can be hard....... thank you for your intresting write
icebox
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5 posted 2004-06-09 06:18 PM


I like the image...a lot.
iliana
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6 posted 2004-06-09 06:24 PM


Alright! ! !
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7 posted 2004-06-09 09:54 PM


I too thought of the motion picture....

Silliness forgiven and allowed.....

passing shadows
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8 posted 2004-06-10 01:59 AM


I think this is the shortest one you've done...
great little write!

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-06-10 09:23 AM


I enjoyed your 'silliness' LeeJ!  Well done and good morning.
jwesley
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10 posted 2004-06-10 09:50 AM


Very cute my friend - always nice to awake and see something that makes you smile.

jwesley

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