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Of Wail and wind
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Of Wail and wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Wail and Wind The wind wails passions of ferment Fills the sails to ripping strain Tears the lashings in lament Bulging sails to varicose vein And thunder sends horrendous pound Drumming on my mental core Silencing the tearing sound With flashing streaks of evermore It is a storm beyond my cope A holocaust of time and wend No brake within the dark for hope It brings me prayers and thoughts of end And though I stay on crest of wave My guiding star is gone of view I can’t let down a life of brave Nor can I steer my soul to blue My ship is caught a paradox I feel I’m in Pandora’s box. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well, we cant have my sweet Sy-babes without a star now can we???  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The wind wails passions of ferment Fills the sails to ripping strain Tears the lashings in lament Bulging sails to varicose vein =================================== could those personifis, alliterations and internal rhymes be any cooler????  *ww*     |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Which one do I follow ????? : |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"Though my soul may sit in darkness, It will arise in perfect light. For I have loved the stars much too fondly ... To be fearful of the night". (author unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, WWRS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Well now we are down to two. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
follow your heart Sy-love... Randy will always keep you on course. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Maybe you should write me an Email? |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That box gets tight, Sy... but sometimes it does seem a safe haven, as well... such is the paradox. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sy, your writes are alway insync but today this is incredible, sending hugs your way |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, follow the second star on the right. So is that you in Pandora's box? Loved this morning's read. ~Mornng hugs, & tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I enjoy your sailing themes Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You could be right. LeeJ Incredible sounds like edible. LOL thank you. Nancy, Thank you dear. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio You are a true friend, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! ~ May wind whip passion in thy sail May thunder make you strong and hale. May storms make way for skies of blue May all your dreams come true for you May starlight guide you on your way And sunshine brighten every day.    EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Well if that don't keep me on the straight and narrow, nothing will. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Damn, this is good (sorry) ...  I'll be chewing on this for a while... ...within my own Pandora's box.. One of your best, if not THE... CG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CastleGuard Delicious comment, thank you. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
WEll now, Sy, I truly believe should I dare to open Pandora's box, you are not who I would find there. You have woven your words quite rhythmically! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
VAS Thank you for the read and comment. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellente` Bravo! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JL Thanks for the excellent. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dark write, you? Well, I feel it, too, but am going to ignore it and pretend it doesn't exist. To tell you the truth, my jaw dropped when I read this exquisite expression of my own feelings (of yesterday).  ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ilian Wonderful comment, thank you for the read. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
beautiful reflection of feelings ...great write |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
jellybeans Thank you my friend. |
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