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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-06-07 06:35 PM

Dear God

You know why
these tears
fall on my
pillow tonite.
If you would
do this for me,
please soften her heart.
If not,
please soften my fall.
I only wanted to love her.
Perhaps she doesn't
want that at all.
It's her call.

JamesLee
June06
2004

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-07 06:38 PM

"please soften her heart.
If not,
please soften my fall."

Love this James...especially the above lines..wonderful.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-06-07 06:44 PM

*sigh* A prayer from the heart...**hugs** I hope she hears your heart sing to hers...

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2004-06-07 07:00 PM

Ohhh there are so many memories that can relate to this painful place. Nicely done

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-06-07 09:58 PM

Well done, James...really like the way you put this one together.

jwesley

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2004-06-08 08:02 PM

*sigh* painfull

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-06-09 05:34 AM

James...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-06-09 10:41 AM

time will bring things all together for you and her...patience my friend...and lotsa love and understanding. Love to you

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-06-09 11:08 PM

"it's her call."

JamesLee, I hope she does........jo

swatcatpettus
Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 57
CA

9 posted 2004-06-10 01:24 AM

Love is so two faced, first seeming nice, warm and friendly, then turning on your and crushing your every hope and desire. Bummer.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2004-06-10 01:57 AM

JamesMichael~
The come ... the go ... you write it all so expertly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-06-10 05:04 AM

I thank each one of you for the lovely responses...perhaps she does...its her call...she is a sweetheart...James

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