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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-06-07 06:35 PM


Dear God

You know why
these tears
fall on my
pillow tonite.
If you would
do this for me,
please soften her heart.
If not,
please soften my fall.
I only wanted to love her.
Perhaps she doesn't
want that at all.
It's her call.

JamesLee
June06
2004

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-06-07 06:38 PM


"please soften her heart.
If not,
please soften my fall."

Love this James...especially the above lines..wonderful.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Startime55
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2 posted 2004-06-07 06:44 PM


*sigh* A prayer from the heart...**hugs** I hope she hears your heart sing to hers...
rosepetals25
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3 posted 2004-06-07 07:00 PM


Ohhh there are so many memories that can relate to this painful place.  Nicely done
jwesley
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4 posted 2004-06-07 09:58 PM


Well done, James...really like the way you put this one together.

jwesley

Tequilia_Sunrise
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5 posted 2004-06-08 08:02 PM


*sigh* painfull

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-06-09 05:34 AM


James...
LeeJ
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7 posted 2004-06-09 10:41 AM


time will bring things all together for you and her...patience my friend...and lotsa love and understanding.  Love to you
iliana
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8 posted 2004-06-09 11:08 PM


"it's her call."  

JamesLee, I hope she does........jo

swatcatpettus
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9 posted 2004-06-10 01:24 AM


Love is so two faced, first seeming nice, warm and friendly, then turning on your and crushing your every hope and desire. Bummer.
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10 posted 2004-06-10 01:57 AM


JamesMichael~
The come ... the go ... you write it all so expertly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2004-06-10 05:04 AM


I thank each one of you for the lovely responses...perhaps she does...its her call...she is a sweetheart...James
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