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Open Poetry #32

Just A Girl

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-07 03:43 PM

Just A Girl
I am just a girl
A girl who cries when no one knows
Who is hurt but it never shows
A girl who is grateful for all she has
Who doesn't want her existence to pass
I am just a girl
A girl with a necessary attitude
With a conscience of not being rude
A girl with aspirations and dreams
With a glow of high radiance and beams
I am just a girl
A girl who is different from her peers
Who is forced to smile through her fears
A girl who is frightened by the intensity of one's voice
Who is deeply effected by another's choice
I am just a girl

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

1 posted 2004-06-07 05:51 PM

wonderful flow and sweetly expressed, by a talented young lady--thanks for sharing!

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2004-06-07 07:07 PM

I REALLY like this!!! I'm glad I stopped in to read.

Tara

exhale
Senior Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

3 posted 2004-06-07 07:58 PM

this is such an excelent poem,because it depects exactly what many girls feel.
awesome

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-06-07 09:41 PM

Sounds like you're a 100 percent girl to me, my friend. And I agree with the above - you've expressed it well. And I must say, a girl that loves fishing, camping and poetry???

Wow! Where were you when I needed a girl???

jwesley

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2004-07-05 02:34 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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