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Open Poetry #32

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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19

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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2004-06-07 03:53 AM

Waves swell and break gently
On the lips of a mighty cave.
The crew manoeuvers the vessel
Undaunted into its mouth.
The luminous glow of twilight
Becomes shrouded in bitter shadow;
The rising swells distracted
By timpanic echoes of dripping water.
A haze of shivering reflections
Bounces around the cave interior
As a fluid decoration.
A lamp is lit at the bow,
Revealing a cavern that journeys
Deep into the mountain:
Tremendous stalagmites threaten from above,
Dripping icy water like sweat
From anxious stone watchmen.
A smooth cascade of water
Creates a vast liquid doorway,
A doorway to an lost underground kingdom.

passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-06-07 04:22 AM

what an adventure! imagery is fantastic here!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-06-07 07:42 AM

Tequilia,
"A doorway to an lost underground kingdom."
Of the mind, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-06-07 09:23 AM

Fantastic imagery..much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-06-07 09:44 AM

A wonderful expansion
of sound and travel,
Amanda. Well done!

Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2004-07-05 02:34 AM

thankx everyone for your lovely comments

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