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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-07 07:20 AM


The moon’s glows, fading before dawn,
The path shows, wake to travel on
Mountain trail, beneath summers snows,
No avail, no melt winter blows,
High rock walls, between treeless slopes,
Vultures calls, being their sup hopes.
At the crest, sun shines on moss green
And he rests, reflects what he’s seen.
Water cup, dipped in icy brook,
Take no sup, continues with look,
Feeding on the beauty of the view.

Gloom



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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-06-07 07:29 AM


Professor,
Beauty comes in many wrappings, enjoyed.

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2 posted 2004-06-07 07:55 AM


So often for me the view is food enough for the soul.  Very beautiful work to read this early in my morning, thank you.
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-06-07 08:31 AM


some beautiful views in those passes~~

M

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-06-10 02:24 AM


I thought I missed one...glad I went down the page
Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2004-06-22 11:45 AM


"Feeding on the beauty of the view"

And it supplements the soul.


"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

iliana
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6 posted 2004-06-22 01:18 PM


His scenery is worth looking at, too!  Enjoyed very much, Gandolf!   ....jo
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