Open Poetry #32 |
The Green Moss Pass ZZ 15 |
Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
The moon’s glows, fading before dawn, The path shows, wake to travel on Mountain trail, beneath summers snows, No avail, no melt winter blows, High rock walls, between treeless slopes, Vultures calls, being their sup hopes. At the crest, sun shines on moss green And he rests, reflects what he’s seen. Water cup, dipped in icy brook, Take no sup, continues with look, Feeding on the beauty of the view. Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Beauty comes in many wrappings, enjoyed. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So often for me the view is food enough for the soul. Very beautiful work to read this early in my morning, thank you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some beautiful views in those passes~~ M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I thought I missed one...glad I went down the page |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"Feeding on the beauty of the view" And it supplements the soul. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
His scenery is worth looking at, too! Enjoyed very much, Gandolf! ....jo |
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