Open Poetry #32 |
Escape Goats |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Escape Goats I am yours, and yes, you are mine… not often enough, but far too much so for some folks, you come home, and we escape… friends are coming in from Houston… I need some time off… And you, my friends, compatriots, escape goats…you give me and mine freedom, peace, laughter, did I mention freedom? The freshest air of April met our faces [and being in Kansas, there’s always a lot of air…] and the sun greeted our smiles; the camaraderie so fine, the laughter, dare I say it, so very gay… And in just a few short days of together again, we whipped problems, found solutions, commiserated, digressed, digested, checked stories against stories of what was told from the last time we reminisced, and something I forgot to tell you, is thank you, for listening about people, places, and events which have no bearing for you; you were never there, didn’t know my people, could only imagine the landscape, but you listened, all the same. We tromped the pastures, and hit the highways; we fed our brains and stomached our insecurities; we encouraged the growing, and empathized over our ages… forever young, forever friends… Escape again soon, that I may use you, that you may use me to run away, to enjoy, and pretend, once again, we have life by the tale…. ~*~ To our friends, J&M It was a great time! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Upbeat and cheerful. Enjoyed! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is wonderful.... haven't had friends like this, to "be" with like this for such a long time |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, this was an exquisite expression of lastly friendship. I loved the title! ......jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Glad you had a great time with your friends! Tell them sis says 'hi'. Hugs to you sweet lady. To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
There's nothing quite like it..is there? Friendship and you and this. Beautiful Karilea. M Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea One day I'd like to be one of those friends! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine, I loved the title and the way you told about your friendship through this witty theme. Clever. As usual, much enjoyed! Sadie |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ both lucky to have one another for the time memories and friendship....how lovingly precious this is....how timeless it remains...good to see you back ! ~~**~~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Oh, Sun, this made me feel for freedom. I love it. |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like the visit was great! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh yes, remembering times well-shared, where everyone 'escaped'...one of the best joys in life is friendship, and it sounds like you had a wonderful time!! ~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so glad you had a great time and it left your muse in perfect form I see. It is good to have great friends yes? Glad you are back lady! (ummm...are you up to a week of me in Kansas yet.....lol...Those fields of yours sound darn good to me....) |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
There is no balm that will soothe and heal Like that of friendship with heartfound zeal. This tells so well of how deeply we feel with true friends. Well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
wonderful write...this is my dream for someday...glad you made it a reality |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
No one does it better. Eric |
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vega Junior Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 24wherever I lay my hat. |
True friendship, a gift for life. Excellent. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Freedom! Yes! Free to just be, as it is possible with true friends. Thank you, dear Karilea, for sharing so very beautifully the fresh April air of Kansas. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I sure liked this one Karilea, it felt like a big comfortable hug. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful write... this one... Regards to you, my friend, Sudhir |
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