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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas 
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The sun still rises like always The wind still refreshes my mind The stars still light the path Of the emotional road we find The memories of you still linger In the day and in the night It's been seven months now And you're still in my every sight Each morning I open my eyes To the nightly lonely stare I can still feel every moment When you use to care Those days are long gone Yet the memories are still here Wondering if I will ever get over you Is my one and only fear A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Dark Kisses -- How well you expressed these feelings of being hopelessly in love. Sometimes, it's just really hard to let go.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hate to break it to you but it may be a well-founded fear (from experience) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed I understand that feeling where memories linger and having someone forever on my mind day and night Hope |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Kisses, Now that is a dark kiss, enjoyd. |
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