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Lips will be painted crimson when we meet...
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Lips will be painted crimson when we meet... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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It is, only imaginary... this temporary velvet of crimson armor... Without this stain I'm winter pale. Know that mine could not part to find a sentence for you after all this time. I won't tell the air between us that motionless bold is bravado knowing the outline of your own is swaying on my horizon offering nothing.... expecting submission, for edges to curl among foolish laughter lines forgiving something you'd done that you don't remember. ...It's not impossible... But words for you are Crimson smiles tell me the only thing it knows... You'll be waiting for answers like I waited for yours when we meet. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Crimson smiles tell me the only thing it knows... You'll be waiting for answers like I waited for yours when we meet." Beautiful write Gem!! Love this keeper. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gemma..love the new pic! and the poem is lovely! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Speaking of crimson lips, I love your radiantly smiling ones in your photo! You're pretty as a picture!  ~ and you write as good as you look, Dear Gem Drop! Loves 'n hugs, Lindy Lou |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Know that mine could not part to find a sentence for you after all this time. ~*~ Liking this, I am...very much! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Know that mine could not part to find a sentence for you after all this time. Gosh I love reading you, the above lines speak volumes. another to keep. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Without this stain I'm winter pale. Know that mine could not part to find a sentence for you after all this time. ========================= expecting submission, for edges to curl among foolish laughter lines forgiving something you'd done that you don't remember. ================================== there are certain poets...that when I read them..I feel "poetic tingles" as I feel the words.... it happends nearly every time I read you girl..... ya get me time and time again... and thats a very good thing.  Without this stain I'm winter pale. *sigh* ... damn I wish I had wrote that.  We believe the past could be undone...but time always reveals ... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
absolute beauty gem |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
This was absolutely wonderful! I thoroughly enjoyed all three reads and fully anticipate coming back again... jwesley |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Without this stain I'm winter pale. hard to choose favorite lines, but I love these ones. Sad but beautiful imagery there.  Well done!Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Amazingly well written Andrew |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Your mind and heart are amazing! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"forgiving something you'd done that you don't remember" such memorable lines...what a beautiful piece of writing...lovely, just absolutely lovely...with easy images and flowing lines...such a wonderful read... |
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