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Fortuitous Beams
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Fortuitous Beams |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A moment shines Revealing us Condensed in sigh Distilled in pleasure And what was peeled away But pigment of uncertainty A moment shines Repealing its absence and doubt Where once the sun was fed The steel of dawn glows red Our nature of a primal bloom Now open in the opulence Of knowing Copyright Kkh 6/6/04 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that last verse |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
K. you never cease to amaze me with each line, each word..........the all of it. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this was a really good, enjoyable write...I was going to pick a couplet and comment on it, then saw another that I liked, and then another...the whole thing is goooood! |
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