Open Poetry #32 |
Verde, Verdant |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Verde, Verdant I dream in green now, though life and love, lust and liberty color my world; I dream in green. All colors surround me, I wear black to define edges; but I dream in green; under blue, over rose, highlights of white in display of ray; sun-glints in pray; life time’s array; earth toned in way of play, yes, I dream in green… with an underlining line skipping rope, in hope. I dream green. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
green is my fav colour you dream beautifully in green sunshinygirl. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't say if I dream in color or not...don't really know good write here |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I dream in color also...but not all green.. although I do love green so much.. Lovely write Sunshine! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Perhaps you're going to win the lottery? Nice job! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
Intresting thoughts THANK-YOU |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This poem..... It's my fifth visit and I still don't know what to say. This poem affected me....down inside, where it counts. So ardent, so intense, so vulnerable, so honest, so hopeful....there aren't enough so's.... Occasionally I print out a poem and lay it on the desk in front of my computer screen for a week or so....then I can read it any time I feel the need...this will be one of them. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
am green with envy now... regards sudhir |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Green is good! Enjoyed... JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I agree, Green is good. Sunshine, this was the uplift that I needed today. Thanks you for the color. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I always like color poems. Thank you for sharing this, Karilea... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A lush, full color in which to dream, Karilea! Loverly! Corinne |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
a keeper. to me this whispered, independence, movement and of course, growth. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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