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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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oblivion jealousy is nothing more than the insecure reminders from a voice silenced long ago learning to speak again through the bile of another's wake so i choose to not swim i choose to stand on the shore, sinking ankle deep ... into oblivion ©sdt'04 "yet each man kills the thing he loves by each let this be heard, some do it with a bitter look, some with a flattering word" oscar wilde |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
interesting way to look at it |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Excellent definition and write, Snow.  |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
thought provoking........ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Powerful words with powerful meaning... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hey, this was great. I wrote one once with the same name but nowhere near as good as yours. If I can find it, will post it for the heck of it - maybe. Good write, me friend. jwesley |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
jwesley, please do, post again, i'd like to read it.  thank you all for the comments! snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
very nicely developed...love the concept of choice...makes one think...and that is always good... |
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