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Seduced By Trees
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Seduced By Trees |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Seduced By Trees there is a sensual seduction by trees tempting you in green as they wave outstretched to touch with branched arms calling your name as you walk near whispering secrets in tender rustles do you turn to accept sap advances while they shade the trickle of heat |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Short and sweet. Great imagery. Standing in a woods. That's where I see myself in your words. Don't you wish trees could tell you stories? Tell us what they have seen over the centuries? Thanks for sharing your poem. Kevin |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, this was a wonderful poem to read at this time of the morning -- great writing!  ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great imagery |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wonderful, so much said, so much to read between the trees  Enjoyed. Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I just gotta tell you, I read this and have now spent all morning with a hot glue gun and leaves from my oak tree, but it just isn't working!!!!! ...and now I have all these small red marks on me from the glue gun!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *GRINNNNNNNNNNNNNN* |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes...oh Yes !! Hugs to you ! Chris |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I guess I've become a corrupted old toad because I kept reading "women" everyplace I saw "trees" - As everyone else says, Slick, this is a wonderful write and I much enjoyed seeing it. jwesley |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful write red |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
you have seduced me with these words. the title drew me in. sensual and oh so true. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Another seduced by the title, beautiful writing Andrew |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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