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Foxyoasis
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0 posted 2004-06-05 10:11 PM


The eye's of another man
turn to me as he stares
deeply into them I feel
his heart touch mine..

I turn away like I never
seen him or the light of day
and all that remains on my
mind is you. How do you
captivate me in such a way
where you take over my heart
and soul?

As I dream in my peaceful sleep
it is you who I meet that is how
you get to me not only your charm
kindness or strength that gets to me
you ravel yourself into my dreams


So I say I shout out rescue me
my heart and take me from this
everday thinking of you sweep me
off my feet and take me away to
a place where you and I can go
to lay on the beaches and have
wet sand between our toes.

Not a care in the world I look
at you and all my problems melt
away like icecream on a hot summer
day. ahh the day where we reunit is
a day to remember
unedited

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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1 posted 2004-06-05 10:34 PM


very easy to visualize! Enjoyed!
                Sadie

Foxyoasis
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2 posted 2004-06-05 10:35 PM


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iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-05 11:41 PM


Foxyoasis -- certainly sound likes someone has the key!  Well done.   ........jo
Foxyoasis
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4 posted 2004-06-05 11:58 PM


sure does hehe

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


JamesMichael
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5 posted 2004-06-06 12:20 PM


Silky...James
Foxyoasis
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6 posted 2004-06-06 12:29 PM


Silky? lol

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