Open Poetry #32 |
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Remember You |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk ![]() |
Wrote it for this new novel im writing called deadly extraction Can't tell you what its about cos it will spoil it know what i mean anyway hope you enjoy the poem Title:- Remember you Remember you, Through different eyes Finding truth where most lies hide Walked through dreams, dreams of you Places tread our memories; I’ve found you. But memories fade within the light And you’ll stay locked away inside Till sleep plays her sweet lullaby And dreams unfold in the dead of night. Tears shall fall behind Stay in reality absorb in the light You don’t belong to me I belong to you Can’t open my mind to something new. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Awwww... a new novel you say? Have you already published some? Let me know. Nice poetry...it could fit many themes and reflections! Thanking you, Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Nice write, good feelings from it, best of luck with your novel! Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
If this poem is an example of how the book will be it sounds like it will be something wonderful. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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