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Kevo
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since 2004-06-02
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Navarro County, Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-06-05 12:52 PM


Fields of Antietam

Gentle the goodnight bids its welcome
of humble spirit and gilded heart
of our hailed heroes fallen upon the field.  

This road that takes me home
driven in principle
shall not yield to the lamenting soul
which beckons him rest not
in fields of Antietam.  

Honor him, who does fall
upon the crimson soil
lost in this sea of wickedness.  
Shall you not partake of
the sacrificial kiss with me?  

Break your bread
you honored few who are about to die.  
I salute you.  
Follow me this fated morn!  
The hallowed day is upon us.  

Drink of my blood
that it may lay sweet
upon your courageous tongue.  
“This do in remembrance of me.”  
I am of the lamb,
sacrificed upon the cross,
for all free men.  

With Him do I ever stand,
forever falling upon this land torn.  
Lamenting spirit,
troubled youth,
fear not the cannon-fire
raining death upon this desperate field.  

Rise free brethren!
Thrust the sword of Gideon
upon the breast of despondence.  
Brandish honor with head held high
upon the Reaper’s field
resting not to the opulent mass of decadence
stretched before you.  

Nay, the night forays its sleepy shadow
over your fragile soul.  
So the body falls.  
Does not your spirit rise
to walk the peaceful road home?  

Does not tranquility
abode upon the cobble there
comforting your weary walk
upon hero’s foot?  

Rise!
Defend!
Split the night with iron will
and battle-clad hoof.  

In him do we ever endeavor
to free all men in this sovereign union.  
Steady the thunder,
clap of the hoof,
and unkept boot
marching into history
this very night
and upon this very field
rich with the cry of free men
resolved in sovereignty
at the end of the bayonet.  

This is the way,
the life,
freedom’s light.  

Cast the hues of blues,
grays,
and crimson tides
upon this day’s canvas.  

Antietam, our bodies lie.  
Sacrificed upon your magnificent field.  
So that free men may live
the lives we gave away.  

Even so,
as heroes of the day,
we echo through eternity
upon this sovereign wind,
“Fields of Antietam,
we the dead salute you!”

Copyright, Kevin V. Reese, 2004


© Copyright 2004 Kevin Reese - All Rights Reserved
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-05 12:59 PM


"In him do we ever endeavor
to free all men in this sovereign union.  
Steady the thunder,
clap of the hoof,
and unkept boot
marching into history
this very night
and upon this very field
rich with the cry of free men
resolved in sovereignty
at the end of the bayonet."

Kevin, you could have told me you were actually there and I would believe you!  Outstanding writing.......jo


Kevo
Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466
Navarro County, Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-06-05 01:04 AM


Thanks Jo.  Your kind words were really appreciated.  Thank you for welcoming me here.

Kevin

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-06-05 03:44 AM


I'm not much into war poetry but this was touching
kayjay
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since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015
Oregon
4 posted 2004-06-05 06:28 AM


Well thought out lines. In all centuries, it is the battle dead who are most remembered.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

wranx
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since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2004-06-05 09:29 AM


I live nearby the battlefield....It's humbling to walk over it knowing what transpired there.
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