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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2004-05-22 12:32 PM



Spread thy wings afar they part over heaven’s gate,
So pure, white, soft like clouds;
Move so gentle without no sound,
Lift me off my feet to journeys start.

Descend upon the earth with truth,
Cry angel tears to those who fall,
Bring love back from hatred souls,
Search for peace we all do hold.

And journeys end you’ll find so near,
As you hear a voice once known,
Before your angel wings did form,
You were human like all you’ve known,
An angel now in heavens world.

© Copyright 2004 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-05-22 04:30 PM


quote:
Descend upon the earth with truth,
Cry angel tears to those who fall,
Bring love back from hatred souls,
Search for peace we all do hold.



Dear Lee, this is beautiful and deeply touching, a prayer my heart knows.
Love, Margherita

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058

2 posted 2004-06-02 10:24 PM


this is without a doubt the very best work of yours that I have had the pleasure of reading...well done...keep it up...more please...
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-06-02 11:51 PM


Very sweet, Lee, very soft and sweet.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-06-03 12:00 PM


Hi, Lee! Wonderful to read you again! You have so many facets to your talent ~ love, fantasy, the celestial realms...

This poem was soft, sweet ~ and poignant.


Linda

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
5 posted 2004-06-05 05:01 AM


~Beautiful poetry, I believe in angels!

~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-06-05 01:01 PM



stottbear94
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Living in Daddy's Eyes
7 posted 2004-06-05 01:02 PM


beutiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This makes me think of my dead ancestors!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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