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VAS
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0 posted 2004-06-04 12:00 PM


At the Door

bathing in sun
one side’s done
feline fun
Yawn

©June 4, 2004
I must
I must
I must get off my duff
to pull
to pull
to pull the weeds that wait


and wait, and wait, and wait

©June 4, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-06-04 12:28 PM



The lazies got you, Virginia?
I fell 'em tugging at me, too!

iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-04 12:51 PM


VAS -- I enjoyed the rhythm of this and the wistfulness.  
iliana
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3 posted 2004-06-04 12:51 PM


VAS -- I enjoyed the rhythm of this and the wistfulness.  
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4 posted 2004-06-04 12:56 PM


yep...better to pull them than to trust some chemical weed killer that says it won't kill the grass...
LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-06-04 12:57 PM


the oder I'm becoming the more I know the word procrastinate...smiles...good one!
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6 posted 2004-06-04 06:30 PM


i know the feeling myself, good case of the lazies here


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-06-06 12:59 PM


Hey, you're not supposed to remind people about the weeds...I did about eighty per cent of them the other day...got stung twice by two different wasps trimming the plants...aha...now I know where the wasp nest is...James
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