Open Poetry #32 |
Textures of Sight |
Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Textures of Sight The sun and the wind quietly tip toeing through the open window on this early summer morn, kissing, caressing, coaxing you gently awake. You reach, smile, letting nature flow over skin that is the texture and color of satiny cream. You glide to the window and smell and feel the colors of green and the warmth of gold. The texture beneath your feet is a soft soothing shag that tickles your bare sensitive toes sending the message of buttery yellows and tawny beige. An aroma of stinging, pungent textures invade your delicate nostrils and the fragrance of pepper and onion descend into your inner mind. This scent flashing red, stinging your eyes, along with the burning taste of bittersweet agony. As you follow these scents, your hand runs along the textures of the walls and you shuffle your feet along the path that leads you to the room of this fascinating aromatic cuisine. As you enter the room a cool dark shadow gently strokes your cheek and a light kiss upon your lips. Then you hear the words that will send color and textures to your sensual palette and your active mind. With a smile upon your hungry lips those enticing words that are whispered on the summer breeze are, “Good morning dear, breakfast is ready.” [This message has been edited by Bonnie j (06-04-2004 12:59 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bonnie So sensory pleasing, this!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ Oh yeah girlfriend ... oh yeah~ Marvelous morning memories meandering~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, very sensory I do think you want "through" in the first line, though. Love how you can see and feel colors with your toes. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
BonBon -- I think, perhaps, my very favorite of yours -- this was great! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautifully written and felt... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Thanks VAS. Maybe when I wrote this I just woke up and threw my toes through the open window. LOL Thanks once again. Glad you all liked. BonBon |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
good one |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ooh, this just sparkles all over! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Ohhhhhhh Bonnie Bonnnnnnnnn. Add to the fantasy A long … long … long …hug [email protected] |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Jaime strokes Bon Bonnie's write in Braille:--) |
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