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CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
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since 2003-07-16
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0 posted 2004-06-03 08:58 PM



There was no pain in his eyes
as he left me
No sorrow in his voice
despite our past,
despite our love
he regretted that he needed me
that he loved me so
and no amount love returned
would heal a pride now gone
he was everything to me
and i even more to him.
but his ego was an evil foe
so he left without a tear
i told myself to be strong
1 that it was for the best
but even now i know the truth
that now,
i am noone

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
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1 posted 2004-06-06 08:47 PM


"and no amount [of] love returned
would heal a pride now gone"

such a captivating line in such a melancholy poem...as the song says...one is the loneliest number that there ever was...

a most painful ending...

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