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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-04 08:10 AM

Morning
Still tired shell
Groaning and dragging out
From the soft comfort of the dark,
Awake.

Working
In fire pit
Of spiritual torment,
Outward emotionally stark,
Being.

Mumble,
Words left unsaid,
Garbbled verbal spewing
That only intent determined
Grumble.

Being
As long as there
Then gone at first release
Chaos filling up the inner mind,
Numbing.

Wearing
Scrapping the soul
What little still remains;
Then finds soft comfort of the dark,
Sleeping.

Morning

Gloom

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-06-04 08:24 AM

Morning Gloom, this write made me feel very sad....sending hugs....and a Happy Friday

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2004-06-04 10:26 AM

"Wearing
Scrapping the soul
What little still remains;
Then finds soft comfort of the dark,
Sleeping.

Morning

Gloom"

Heavy stuff. Really enjoyed the read.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-06-04 08:11 PM

heavy stuff, but peotry in nice form;

I noticed some patterns in it.  Is this a particular type of poem?

                    S.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-06-04 08:22 PM

Emotive in thick puddy, cauking window and creek of light...
Depressed in the whir of worldly commerce...
Yet later, peace in the quiet after, a still mind.
Just an alternative reality Gloom...
Great write.
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-04 09:39 PM

The layout of this caught the hum-drum and weight of unanswered wishing. Tomorrow's Saturday, my friend....enjoy.

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-06-05 03:27 AM

understanding this well

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-06-22 11:41 AM

"Morning
Still tired shell
Groaning and dragging out
From the soft comfort of the dark,
Awake."

Yep...where is Juan when you need him??

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2004-06-22 11:48 AM

understood this all to well Proff. As usual, your writing is extraordinary in it's presentation and form.

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