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Unforgiving Wind...
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Unforgiving Wind... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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I reach deep into my soul, asking what more can I give.... I think of tomorrow and I sigh, knowing maybe there is hope out there Peaceful days full of sunshine and more await, no more clouds of blue Ironic how these things are somehow all wrapped up into you I think fate needs a little nudge Often I wonder do you think of me I know that I hurt you so much and I'm sorry Now from this pain, I'm trying to become free I'm still so mad at myself So, how can I expect you to forgive me Restless, I wonder along this path of life I wish I could just let things be... If I could reach out to the vast beyond There are so many words I'd love to say I know though that it would be unheard by the unforgiving wind So instead, I'll just walk away my friend... "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Aimster, This is so genuine. You write so gently but your words impress upon ones heart. Sadelite |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Aimster Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know I understand  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I know though that it would be unheard by the unforgiving wind good line, Amy hugs M |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i felt this one. i understand. thanks for sharing  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much... sometimes it feels there are no words... maybe because there's no hope in speaking them. *S* Excellent! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice. Enjoyed this poem so much! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Thank you all for the kind words and support. Means so much! Take care, Amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Aimster: Great Poem, love the title. Your words do indeed touch the heart. Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good write, Amy -- heartfelt.  ...jo |
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