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The Path Alone (Duet with Sunshine)
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The Path Alone (Duet with Sunshine) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Walking after darkness into the light of day pause to hear the music ~ past slowly fades away....... Mists are silent, shifting, time dangles at my toes into the past I'm drifting, and sense the scent of rose The mist holds a vision of past and yet to be canvas of the future reveals a scene to me. "Imagine," whispers Wind, "of all that I have seen!" Moon and Stars come to me, "We have dusted ev'ry dream!" As the mist starts rising the light begins to shine, sheds light on the future through the stardust of time "Imagine," whispers Sun, "of the mysteries to see!" I smile in hold of time and all it holds for me. In celestial skies stars twinkle in unison shining on the pathway, my journey has just begun! It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh, it's so good to read you and Sunshine What a write Especially liked "Imagine," whispers Sun, "of the mysteries to see!" I smile in hold of time and all it holds for me. Bravo you two, didn't want this to end, it was a perfect rendition from two souls that blend! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A gentle, spirited, sunshiny write! The melding of two poetic spirits! Captivating!  Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Brava!!! Donna and Karilea!! This is fantastic...a keeper..by two of Passions finest! ~Love & Hugs to you both, Nancy~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wonderful duet you two! Uplifting...I think I will take in a beach sunrise soon... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
~time dangles at my toes~ Beautiful you two, with a feeling of gentle magic, as well as an overwhelming feeling of freedom and elation. just what I needed! thankyou! xx |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful write from two beautiful ladies. Enjoyed very much. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You two really shine! Enjoyed this very much. hugs to you both.....jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks much for the lovely replies to this duet that gave me so much enjoyment writing. I wish we could see even more duets on the boards. Karilea thank you for the pleasure of dueting again and for such wonderful inspire. Have a great day everyone! It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL...you started it, oh Gentle One...  Thanks you, poets, for your eyes! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Oh my! This is just so tender and beautiful... Makes me want to take some time, to listen to the music, today  Well done ladies! Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed the sharing of your words... thank you, M |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea and Donna What a lovely word path you have taken me on this morning. Thank you! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this blends so well that I can't tell which verse is whose just beautiful! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is such a beautiful poem! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
As Kari said, thank you poets for the eyes, and for the words! And Sunnylady.....thank you too. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Mists are silent, shifting, time dangles at my toes into the past I'm drifting, and sense the scent of rose Your voices blend so beautifully! *S* Seamless collaboration! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit & Karilea~ Very smoothly blended~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Suthern, Marge....  Thanks so much for the kind words. |
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