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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-06-02 10:45 AM

Animated dreams live digitally in the soul
Like Africa hot awakenings linking hopeful
Noteworthy vermilion thoughts birthing music
Multiply like golden pollen specks of magic

Delirium arches a wrapping silence sweet
Serpentines throughout wind’s fresh bare feet
Moon bathes in spring, wearing the threshold of source
A frantic breathe we can feel and touch

The essence of a scent we know
Shivers with anticipation, holding gentle
There I dissolve into echoes of tunes
Sporadic drifts of slow motion

Where night and day fuse
Pouring branches of lilac perfume
Into the threshold of dreams
Trailing scents smother me

I want to know forever and the way it embraces dawn
It’s vastness, to comprehend & quantity upon
To know and feel the pulse of day
And it’s eternal lasting flame

Warmed by creamy textures of time
What is the multitude of sublime?
Where pure meaning awakens
A tapestry within isometric resolution

Silhouettes of thought, swollen motions
Surreal enchanting window of forever portions
Memory whirling round and round
Enriching winks of fragrant elegance profound

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-06-02 02:59 PM

I want to know forever and the way it embraces dawn
It’s vastness, to comprehend & quantity upon
To know and feel the pulse of day
And it’s eternal lasting flame

Yes. Enjoyed this write.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2004-06-02 03:06 PM

"Where night and day fuse
Pouring branches of lilac perfume
Into the threshold of dreams
Trailing scents smother me"

~ These lines were especially experiencial for me!

Your writes always peak my imagination!

Linda

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-06-02 04:48 PM

Detailed imagery in this write. You do make beautiful poetry.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

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