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Open Poetry #32

Philosopher Dreaming (Haiku)

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

0 posted 2004-06-02 01:51 AM

Prizmed dewdrop’s yield.
A field of vision’s color,
Waiting to be found.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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1 posted 2004-06-02 02:04 AM

very nice! good job!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-02 02:05 AM

Dix - thanks -- have a need to write, tonight, but haiku is all that comes.

...jo

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

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Lurking

3 posted 2004-06-02 08:59 AM

Wonderful writing

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-06-02 09:04 AM

EXCELLENT!!!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-06-02 09:09 AM

Lovely!!!!!

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2004-06-02 09:14 AM

I’ve been known to do
A haiku or two or more
I enjoy the style

Gloom

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

7 posted 2004-06-02 03:41 PM

you seemed to have linked the poetic beauty of nature with the endless wisdom of well reasoned philosopy...well done...and all in a haiku...extremely well done...

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

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Pencilveinia, USA

8 posted 2004-06-02 04:19 PM

YES!

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2004-06-02 04:31 PM

You nailed this one! Great!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

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