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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-06-02 10:12 AM




Still to Always

You still write about him?

                               I still write about him.

Why?

Because my blood still runs;
            My skin feels depths of warmth
And cold;
I still breathe…

My heart still pumps.

My eyes still tear, I’ve a mind
that remembers,
and I’ve a place deep inside,
                   where soul emotions ache,
while promises are kept.

Because,

I can.

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
dingusjr
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1 posted 2004-06-02 10:16 AM


Now this is nice....very nice.
Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-06-02 10:32 AM


Yes...that is exactly why.

Love ya lady~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-06-02 12:42 PM


yes...you can  

and I am glad of that

Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2004-06-02 12:47 PM


I am with you on this one.

Very nice Sunshiny one.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-06-02 01:19 PM


yes dear poetic one, because you can......yes!!
LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-06-02 01:24 PM


yes, and because we love
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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-06-02 01:48 PM


..and so you should.
love this! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Susan
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8 posted 2004-06-02 02:48 PM


Much enjoyed this.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Earth Angel
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9 posted 2004-06-02 02:53 PM


...me too

Plucked a strident chord on my harp, Dear Sun of Love.
I carry with me the beautiful and loving aspects of every relationship that I have ever had.

Beautiful write ~ beautiful you,
With much affection,
Linda

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-03-2004 03:14 PM).]

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10 posted 2004-06-02 04:09 PM


Wonderful Karilea, and yes we can

Maree.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

JL
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11 posted 2004-06-02 05:11 PM


Memories…
Wonderful memories, past yet present.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
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12 posted 2004-06-02 05:29 PM


B I G  siiiiiigh....... yes, we sure can.   ...jo
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13 posted 2004-06-03 08:19 AM


Because my blood still runs;
            My skin feels depths of warmth
And cold;
I still breathe…

My heart still pumps.

My eyes still tear, I’ve a mind
that remembers,
and I’ve a place deep inside,
                   where soul emotions ache,
while promises are kept.

Because,

I can.
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and we are so glad you can and DO...
please DO it some more.

GG
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14 posted 2004-06-03 08:31 AM


Yeah, when the heart finds someone, no matter what kind of someone... the memories and thoughts never stop. And sometimes that's good... if it gives you poetry? it's good!
Keep writing it

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

Ericc
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15 posted 2004-06-03 12:50 PM


Oh wow...definitely my favorite!

Eric

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16 posted 2004-06-03 02:10 PM


beautiful........so many facets to this like a beautiful jewel
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17 posted 2004-06-03 03:34 PM


Oh, YES! *S* I loved the title... and every word that followed. *S* Into the library with this one.
Sudhir Iyer
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18 posted 2004-06-03 03:38 PM


well said...

of course, you can...

regards
sudhir

Margherita
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Eternity
19 posted 2004-06-05 12:38 PM


Dear Karilea, a very very beautiful one!

... about moments that stretch into eternity and definitely stay with us always.

So good to have them and bringing them into life when our hearts tell us so ...

Love and hugs. See you in July, dear friend. I'm a soon to be grandmother and therefore very very busy.

Margherita

Sunshine
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20 posted 2004-06-07 11:41 AM


So true, Margherita...it's all about moments...

Thank you, everyone!

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