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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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some hello there sky blue skinned woman with exposed allure clouds have fallen away from her bosom moon she don't seem to mind anymore says night likes to show her off in public, she kinda digs it too knowing what it does to the tides she says their ends are cold, the mountains when she leans over them to serve some milky ways or black holes or galaxies of dreams she talks to the wind about her love life or lack of sometimes it is just sex with night anymore and she is lonely in the mornings when he stays gone all day wind whispers make moon ends then dark corner susurration she blushes turqoise and adjusts her clouds to proper but the wind moves them aside and she dances with his eyes _________Dark |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gotta love moon watchers and white waters... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
My oh my....and she is a beauty right now. Love it Dark. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh boy, what bittersweet truth your weave |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
oh, this is fabulously seductive!! I must keep it! ~K~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...also I love the title. Great picture, too! ~K~ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nice..... a lot of class in a little poem. A class called How To Write, that is! Good stuff! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS She was beautiful last night looking in my bedroom window. As usual you airbrush your words and make art. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it's my moon in June remembering~ MM |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
airbrush indeed....one of your best m'friend. Well done Dark. |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
REALLY good stuff. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ THIS IS EXCELLENT WRITING~ 'she talks to the wind about her love life or lack of sometimes it is just sex with night anymore and she is lonely in the mornings when he stays gone all day wind whispers make moon ends then dark corner susurration she blushes turqoise and adjusts her clouds to proper but the wind moves them aside and she dances with his eyes' Solid gold are these thoughts~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome writing! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
ah the magnet moon the mistress of all things |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what you do with imagery and personification is as impressive as the moon.  We believe the past could be undone...but time always reveals ... |
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