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Poet’s Frustration (Haiku)
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Poet’s Frustration (Haiku) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA 
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Deeply reddened fruit hanging still by stems on branch unattainable. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes...so true! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Yeah, Dixie, that's where I am tonight! Thanks for understanding and for your post! lol & hugs, jo |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Hoow well I understand. The perfect write! Excellent! Way to go, iliana! Sadie [This message has been edited by Sadelite (06-03-2004 09:32 PM).] |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
well done!! I'd find a ladder. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Wash away the fuzz Bite showers chin with sweet juice Gives sticky embrace Gloom |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Iliana...I am very impressed! Well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
been there, time and time again Very well done  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
~Jo, Perfect! So clearly stated. ~P |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have vividly captured that all-too-often scenario! ~ Sending you a ladder that will not only reach that desirable piece of fruit, but will reach all the way to the stars!  Love & Light, EA |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
you have caught this one well...fully expressive of a far too often occurrence...thank you for the succinctly beautiful write... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wonderfully done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Plum out of hand's reach. Oh, for want of a ladder, while drooling below. glider |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Reminds me of that old fox and the grapes. Great one! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jo~ EXCELLENT !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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