Open Poetry #32 |
Travelling Seed Of The Mind. |
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
White clouds of symmetry astride green fields of beauteous patchwork. Travelling in air conditioned coccoon, down long streches of motorway. The road is long, the sun filled sky is tormented, my heart alien. My thoughts far away, i take refuge in the clouds, from my mind. Thinking of nothing, seeing waves of white clouds, row after row, from electric operated windows, listening to cd music that induces tears. Leaning back in my seat, all of the sky, the fields, the music enter my soul, vacumed to the vast black hole of my psyche. Ghosts call and i want to go, but what prevents me? To release myself onto the wind like a blown seed of summer. Floating past humans unoticed, as if i never was, never produced except in this umbrella form, to pass unheeded in front of people. To be a wildflower seed blown across oceans and mountains, sucked in by speeding trains, deposited on wild Alpine pasture. Finally returning to the earth, a place where my kind all started. Now it is time for me to return to the soft soiled earth, yes back to the earth. ''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I felt like I was floating in a spaceship, looking down at the earth....wonderfully done. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Like a dandelion...blowing about in the wind... ~ARH "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Goldenrose -- so so many good lines in this one. Very wistful and sad at times in a way, but oh, so beautiful. ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful |
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