»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #32
»
Sight
| Open Poetry #32 |
|
Sight |
|
|
wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Thanks Eric for giving me an idea: Take the object for what you see whether trapped or just set free in the hollow of the wood to find mockingbirds call to its own kind Surround your foes with riflemen call at the door of the foxes den, lose your sight before a greater plan they once knelt at the Klondike, to pan... Vision of grandeur comes and goes sightless moles dig their hollows; short-sighted men detract attention miles away to point out where their influence should stay Blindness emanates from those who see they sighted fewer means disposed to flee; their target may be another sitting duck another disfavored nation's out of luck... Surround hated nations with a party of men send messenger in, then count to ten. Overthrown regime visions mask ones sight and sugar plum faeries dance in the night... Visions of conquest beguiled you shortsightedness blinded too. Since you took the object for what you saw it is a foolish dilemma that you'll draw... © copyright 2004 ecrivan [This message has been edited by wordwizard (06-04-2004 12:16 AM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
nice. nice. you have a gift |
||
|
iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very clever writing, Wordwizard! |
||
|
wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Hello Eagle, Based on hits though , it's a pity though I don't get much in the way of feedback after the nice part...I like to know how people relate to what I write, thanks for reading though! |
||
|
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Powerful writing...powerful message. Eric |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
