Open Poetry #32 |
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My Sister, My Friend |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal ![]() |
Yes it is true, From same mother we were born And from same father sired Yet ages stretch between us From oldest to youngest From fist to last Seventeen years lie between How then can this be? That our hearts wander together Laughing out loud in merriment Over a simple moment of trivial silliness Or crying in shared ache Over a tender touch of sorrow Or sitting quietly in awed silence at the hand of God Conversations between us never tire If a conversation is needed at all And I can cry out all my Disappointments And stomp and yell and scream It doesn’t seem to matter You love me still Holding my hand in proffered comfort You say we knew each other before Ever we set foot upon this earth Promising to find one another Remembering even here, this bond we shared And it is true, these words you speak For with you I am home And know the promise was there And when the time comes And our paths again part Wait for me dearest one For it shant be long Before we walk together again Hand in hand Best of friends and Sisters eternal S.A.T. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful loving tribute to your sister,... and sisterhood. Very nicely done indeed. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always Dancing with you in the summer rain~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gorgeous, Susan. I have known relationships like this, too. Your lucky girl, you. ![]() [This message has been edited by iliana (06-02-2004 11:25 AM).] |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Conversations between us never tire If a conversation is needed at all And I can cry out all my Disappointments And stomp and yell and scream It doesn’t seem to matter You love me still Holding my hand in proffered comfort Yup....sisters....beautiful !! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes all that and more, very lovely tribute |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is precious...I have to let my daughters read this |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very beautiful write Susan and very much enjoyed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You say we knew each other before Ever we set foot upon this earth Promising to find one another Remembering even here, this bond we shared And it is true, these words you speak For with you I am home And know the promise was there ~*~ The best kind of sisterhood... this was a pleasure, and a treasure. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"You say we knew each other before Ever we set foot upon this earth Promising to find one another Remembering even here, this bond we shared And it is true, these words you speak For with you I am home And know the promise was there" My sister and I are 11 yrs apart, oldest and youngest, and we have always said the same...that most probably I was her mother in another life as I have such a need to take care of her... Very touching poem and it touchs my heart. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all for your kind replies. Hugs -- Susan ![]() The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Having two sisters of my own who I'm very close to I felt this both heart and soul...sisterhood is a treasured gift and you've captured that so sweetly. I hope you and your sister have many more fond memories and loving times together! Take care, Amy ![]() "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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