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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-06-01 02:07 PM

It doesn't matter the
distance.

We are sightless even as we
fall beneath the others
gaze.

There is nothing left to
search for...

When eyes no longer matter.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-06-01 02:49 PM

WOW!!! Just WOW!!
Eric...I love how your mind works!!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

cinnamongirl
Member

since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

2 posted 2004-06-01 05:20 PM

Pure magic that goes well beyond the weakness of simple human sight... you see through the eyes of your own divinity, and what bliss is revealed through your gifted words!

Beautiful.

I love you,

Moca

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

3 posted 2004-06-01 05:42 PM

Wonderful writing

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-06-01 10:27 PM

To define that point of contact where the pulse and impulse meet is truly a gift to behold Eric.
Extraordinary.
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-01 11:52 PM

Absolutely breathtaking, Eric!

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

6 posted 2004-06-02 12:56 PM

Absolutely lovely.

wordwizard
Member

since 2003-09-08

Posts 483
on the way to next world

7 posted 2004-06-02 01:03 AM

I see this poem in the context of keeping a large military force in Iraq, Afghanistan ( and soon? )which shouldn't be there, but alas military machines must be exercised to stay efficient and we are blinded by thinking that conflicts will remain far away as long as deployment abroad continues...good approach using simple text