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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-06-01 04:44 AM


Awaiting your love to return with alacrity,
as alike as identical roses.
Each flurrishing best within
each other's glow.

My life now changed forever, to
the gentlest flower in the garden.
No more,no more, no more,
this on my life i do pledge.

I need nothing but you in my sight,
in my heart, in my arms.
Piano music plays, and wrings my
heart out, to stain these very pages.

Pages meant for love's pride and joy,
not weeping misitness, of ones's soul lost forever.
Return again to my woodland of love,
centred by a faintly rippling lake.

Fall back into this embattled knights
arms, newly returned from hells worse demons,
who now see's the truest path of loves light,
you can help rid me of satan's temptation.

Goodness dwelled within me until
i fell under the sprung trap of
the evil one, who wanted to destroy
the good and rid our love of benevolence.

Now i see, i can recognise, my eyes
are fully awoken, veils lifted.
''What trickery do i see'' echoes
through chambers and halls of my mind.

Once i helped you Vermilion Queen,
i made you live, i gave you love,
freeing you of the choking numbness.
Now you have wings to fly, please fly not from me.

Such gallant tales of heroism,
dwells within my mind and heart,
yearning to be told. My fables can
only be told to you or Princesses.

Once they were told in times of old,
from the land of The Bard and
Arthur.Bold tales no prophecy could
see or fortell, secrets to unlock.

Where once my woodland glowed with
hues of colour splashes of wildflowers,
they die as each day passes.
Dark tangling and strangling thorns do come.

Creeping evil enters in midnight's
darkest depths, to chase singing
Nightingales away.Only your love can
end this with glowing light of love.

Streaming light does eminate from you,
the flowers grow towards your light,
the birds and tiny creatures rest
safely within your love life and glow.

To your heart i want to intensify
the glow, by giving you my firiest,
warmest love.My sword and lance
i pledge and give to thee Queen of Vermilion.

''Death where is thy sting? Love where is thy glory?'' William Shakespeare.

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passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-06-01 11:59 AM


how romantic!
iliana
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2 posted 2004-06-01 02:23 PM


very romantic!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2004-06-01 04:45 PM


Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2004-06-05 09:20 AM


This was truely blood letting....I feel the ache in your words...

~ARH

"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


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