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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-04-19 04:15 AM

Sinking into the china walls,
the frail glass that has never broken.

Rusted pages in an empty journal,
invisibility and ink.
Trapped between a world of words,
and a world of silence.
Each spinning
around.

The opposites attract and
crash
into eachother,
a magnificant explosion of miscreation.
The maze is too complex, confusion spreads
around.

The dust has settled where it is now,
there is no movement.
To want anything more animate,
is almost a sin,
if sins
exist at all.

So I name my price and whispers
travel
around.. in a
tragic circle that can never be stopped.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-19 04:32 AM

those damn circles!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-04-19 11:50 AM

Amazing!
Love, Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2004-04-19 12:22 PM

Rusted pages in an empty journal,
invisibility and ink.
Trapped between a world of words,
and a world of silence.
Each spinning
around.

Your poetry is laced with reality and so wonderfully vivid.

Nicely done, Kaoru~
Hope all is well in the oven~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-04-19 02:10 PM

The opposites attract and
crash
into eachother,
a magnificant explosion of miscreation.
The maze is too complex, confusion spreads
around.

Seems so unfair, yet from which we can sometimes learn so much...outstanding!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-04-19 02:29 PM

i dont know what to say to this, everytime i go to respond, the words fail me...everytime.
you write in such a way that my mind travels at lightspeeds of all the things it may mean..but damned if they find their way to my pen....

once again left speechless but still wanting to let you know it was more than enjoyed

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-04-19 03:26 PM

So I name my price and whispers
travel
around.. in a
tragic circle that can never be stopped.

Your creations are excellent...loved this part expecially, and the wheels keep on turning...hugs...love Lee J.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-04-19 03:50 PM

Trapped between a world of words,
and a world of silence.
Know that feeling~~ love reading you...

M

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

8 posted 2004-04-19 04:10 PM

Your language is exquisite, every phrase explodes and multiplies in image, thoughts, feelings swirling by...Whether "straight or crooked" your words fly....~P

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2004-04-19 06:39 PM

Trapped between a world of words,
and a world of silence.
Each spinning
around.

``````````````

So I name my price and whispers
travel
around.. in a
tragic circle that can never be stopped.

O how I know this.. fantastic Meg...
one more thing...this.....
"I'm getting there, one step at a time..Keep me straight, or I'll go crooked again."

I love the crookedness of you..if that makes any sense.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2004-04-19 07:51 PM

"Rusted pages in an empty journal,
invisibility and ink.
Trapped between a world of words,
and a world of silence.
Each spinning
around"

whew! You never cease to amaze me....
your poetry rocks

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