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Open Poetry #32

Just Five more minutes...

MovesInSilence
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 111
Perth, Australia

0 posted 2004-06-01 12:56 PM

Just Five more minutes...

To be a princess once more
so I can be rescued and adored.

Just five more minutes
to be with my future love
so I can feel safe in their arms.

Just five more minutes
to fly like a bird
so I can soar through the sky.

Just five more minutes
of SLEEP is all I ask ...

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

1 posted 2004-06-01 01:07 AM

Heh!! Oh I loved this!!! It brought the biggest smile to my face. I so know this feeling, I CHERISH my sleep! Well done, wonderfully written.
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-06-01 02:18 AM

understanding this well

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-06-01 09:05 AM

Ahh yes sleep, lovely Lina

Maree.

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-06-01 09:12 AM

Oh my...do I know this feeling well.
Yes..just five more minutes to ....dream.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-01 11:17 AM

Cute! Very. And enjoyed.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2004-06-01 11:19 AM

I understand this completely...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

7 posted 2004-06-02 04:57 AM

sleep?
can i have a few more YEARS sleep please?
LOL

you know buddy, how much i enjoy finding you opening yourself up to these new horizons.
..good job Lina

MovesInSilence
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 111
Perth, Australia

8 posted 2004-06-03 10:16 PM

Thank you all for the comments

i'm glad i could bring a smile to someones face .. an few minutes sleep to others.

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