You're Silently Strangling Me

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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2004-04-19 03:02 AM

You're Silently Strangling Me

Its the devastating impact
My heart deeply shocked
Since you have lost touch
My emotions are blocked

Waiting is never much fun
Yearning happens silently
On everyday that goes by
I am stunned by the reality

Is there reason for silence
I have had no explanation
As you write less and less
It created more frustration

Your silently strangling me
As I hang waiting the rope
A heart dangles in despair
Slowly I am losing all hope

Hope©2004

[This message has been edited by HopeS (04-19-2004 04:31 AM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-19 03:53 AM

I think it may be time for a rebirth!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-04-19 11:05 AM

Very emotional write with lots of hurt, Hope.
I hope that you hear what you
want to hear, soon.
Hugs,
Ethel

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-04-19 11:08 AM

Waiting is never much fun
Yearning happens silently
On everyday that goes by
I am stunned by the reality

yes, it does so hurt, no matter the issue at hand, the hurt sometimes swallows us.

Good one...strong emotional feelings incorporated within the sound of what sometimes seems like torture.

Hugs

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-04-19 11:17 AM

Rather than blocked, your emotions have become a waterfall!
Good write, as always.

... but don't let him do that! Love yourself just a little bit more.
Sending you much love, Margherita

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2004-04-19 12:04 PM

yes! a very good write

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2004-04-19 12:25 PM

I understand these feelings Hope~
But I'm longer stunned by the silence.

I guess that was my first clue!
Be well good poetess~

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-04-19 12:35 PM

Sad feelings expressed from deep within your heart. Almost has a feeling of being very close to a conclusion:

“Your silently strangling me
As I hang waiting the rope
A heart dangles in despair
Slowly I am losing all hope”

Very nice write. Sad, but nice.
JL

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

8 posted 2004-04-19 12:37 PM

Sad, but beautifuly written. I enjoyed reading this and remembering those times of my own.
Sadie

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