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Balladeer
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0 posted 2004-05-31 12:17 PM



(as is my tradition I post this poem every year, either on Memorial Day or Veteran's Day. This year, at Maree's request, Memorial Day it is. Thank you, Maree )

The soldier boy was sitting calmly underneath that tree.
As I approached it, I could see him beckoning to me.
The battle had been long and hard and lasted through the night
And scores of figures on the ground lay still by morning's light

"I wonder if you'd help me, sir", he smiled as best he could."
A sip of water on this morn would surely do me good.
We fought all day and fought all night with scarcely any rest -
A sip of water for I have a small pain in my chest."

As I looked at him, I could see the large stain on his shirt
All reddish-brown from his warm blood mixed in with Asian dirt.
"Not much", said he. "I count myself more lucky than the rest.
They're all gone while I just have a small pain in my chest."

"Must be fatigue", he weakIy smiled. "I must be getting old.
I see the sun is shining bright and yet I'm feeling cold.
We climbed the hill, two hundred strong, but as we cleared the crest,
The night exploded and I felt this small pain in my chest."

"I looked around to get some aid - the only things I found
Were big, deep craters in the earth - bodies on the ground.
I kept on firing at them, sir. I tried to do my best,
But finally sat down with this small pain in my chest."

"I'm grateful, sir", he whispered, as I handed my canteen
And smiled a smile that was, I think, the brightest that I've seen.
"Seems silly that a man my size so full of vim and zest,
Could find himself defeated by a small pain in his chest."

"What would my wife be thinking of her man so strong and grown,
If she could see me sitting here, too weak to stand alone?
Could my mother have imagined, as she held me to her breast,
That I'd be sitting HERE one day with this pain in my chest?"

"Can it be getting dark so soon?" He winced up at the sun.
"It's growing dim and I thought that the day had just begun.
I think, before I travel on, I'll get a little rest ..........
And, quietly, the boy died from that small pain in his chest

I don't recall what happened then. I think I must have cried;
I put my arms around him and I pulled him to my side
And, as I held him to me, I could feel our wounds were pressed
The large one in my heart against the small one in his chest.



© Copyright 2004 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-31 12:21 PM


thank you deer

very touching

Susan
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2 posted 2004-05-31 12:24 PM


  such a beautiful and touching write.  Such sorrow.

Susan

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3 posted 2004-05-31 12:46 PM


Thankyou for reposting this heartfelt piece.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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4 posted 2004-05-31 01:04 PM


I'm glad you reposted, Balladeer -- heartfelt for sure...... .....jo
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5 posted 2004-05-31 01:07 PM


Maree is right. We should remember our Vets. And we owe it to them to remember them well. This does that, every year. Thanks Balladeer. I like that this is a part of my tradition too.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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6 posted 2004-05-31 01:38 PM


Remember them all....even those that fall
upon the dusty earth this day....all giving
for our freedom that we might have the
luxury of life liberty and happiness.

Thanx for bringing this one back up to the
top Mike.  Always a good one...

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7 posted 2004-05-31 02:16 PM



Thank you 'Deer.

GG
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8 posted 2004-05-31 02:36 PM


I've loved this the first time I read it...
hasn't changed.
Thanks you for this...

Always, Alyssa

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But only God can make a tree.
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9 posted 2004-05-31 03:04 PM


This should be printed on the front page of every major newspaper in the country....
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10 posted 2004-05-31 03:12 PM


~ and please, just keep on a postin' this each and every year! That way, all the new members will have the chance to read it, and we who have already read it, have the chance to appreciate it yet again!

Incredibly moving. I get a lump in my throat every time.

I've been missing you, Dear Balls of Deer!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA


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11 posted 2004-05-31 03:15 PM


This has always been a favorite of mine Michael.  Nice to read it again.

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12 posted 2004-05-31 05:29 PM


Deer, thank you for reposting, you know how much I adore this poem. I think every new member should get the chance to read it. Everytime I read it it just reduces me to tears. One I will never forget.

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This should be printed on the front page of every major newspaper in the country....


I echo Toerag here.

Bal.

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13 posted 2004-05-31 06:51 PM


One of your very best...and one that never fails to bring tears to my heart and a small pain to MY chest. Thank you.
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14 posted 2004-05-31 06:58 PM


This has to be my favorite poem I've read from you, if not my favorite since I've joined this forum. It is so well written.  I'm so happy you repost it year after year

Tara

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15 posted 2004-05-31 07:11 PM


And I was so lucky for the opportunity to hear you recite this poem life.
And though the fact that you know all your poems by heart was impressive enough, hearing it recite in your own voice made it even more impressive. I'll never forget that moment Deer, as I will never forget the Poet behind that superb poem.

Dutch knuffels to you and thank you for the repost.

Titia

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16 posted 2004-05-31 11:09 PM


Balladeer:  I have been reading this for three years now and it always seems new and always makes me cry! Masterfully written!

Betty Lou

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17 posted 2004-05-31 11:11 PM


My thanks to you all for such kind replies. It's always been special to me and I'm glad you think so, also. Best to all of you..

Maree...

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (05-31-2004 11:44 PM).]

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18 posted 2004-06-01 08:39 AM


Sorry I wasn't here over the weekend, Sir, to give you a round of and to thank you, once again, for bringing this one back for everyone.

May we never forget.

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19 posted 2004-06-01 03:16 PM


I'll admit I tire of some reposts... this will never be in that category. *S* I don't even wait for your postings to read it... it's one of my all-time favorites. *S*

Of course... you'd think by now I'd grab the kleenex BEFORE opening it. *S*

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20 posted 2004-06-01 03:22 PM


well done sir, may we never forget
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