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Are We Close In Thoughts
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Are We Close In Thoughts |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Are We Close In Thoughts I was going to write a letter Still I pause once again I thought it over for days Could words clearly explain Shall I wait for another day I had the pen in my hand What I have on my mind Would you truly understand You have heard it all before I tried to find words anew I would only be repeating How much I am missing you As I send from here to there How are feelings defined I feel sure you are aware You have been on my mind I hope words are not in vain What would your reply be Are we close in thoughts Had you been thinking of me Hope©2004 |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I've sat, many times, trying to put to paper how I feel towards my Mike, whether its an "I love you" note, or "I miss you note", the feelings and words do tend to keep repeating themselves,,,,,,,funny thing is,,,when I get a note from him,,,it repeats too,,,,,,  Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if you have to question this, maybe you already have your answer  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey dixie ,maybe I like being reminded , put it down to my uncertainty or my insecuirty Hope |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It's so hard -- the unsteadiness that awaits fulfillment -- these feelings I've certainly felt and understand, and you wrote them well.  ....jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
been there many times. i truly understand |
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