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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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Feeling down, Achy, tired, worried, What is wrong with me, Don’t let me go, I want to feel better, See what the world has to offer me, And get a chance to see the future. I know lately I’ve be negative, But now that I am not feeling like myself it’s got me thinking, I want to feel better, I want to live life to the fullest, I want to be happy. Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Glad you're feeling better....good to see that in your writing.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this  |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Iliana - Thanks for your comments... I just wish I felt better now rather than for what I would hope will be soon. Dixie - Yes, I can only hope it gets better... Glad you understand  ~Kelly~ |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
It begins with intent...a desire. That's the string that connects you with all that you wish for. You are not separate from anything or anyone...what you dream for...dreams of you as well. Your words express the depth of your being and beauty. Here...that's the beginning and the end. Love, Eric |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
and you deserve to be happy! wonderful write. much enjoyed this. take care, amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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