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You rescue Me |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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When I feel When I am caught in the flow Of the flood emotion That tumbles across stone In the rapids of release It is as if I am swept away Unable to navigate my course Or chose my direction And in desperation I throw up my hands In pleading supplication And you reach for me Pulling me safe Into the arms of your love S.A.T. This can be said of many, of Spouse, of Family, of Friends, of God. The embrace of love is but an arms reach away.  The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You express a pure heart dear poetess... Quite striking. TD |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
Pulling me safe Into the arms of your love good good write,my favorite part. |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
I had to read this twice just because it was so beautiful...the last two lines reached out and plucked some hearts strings...Very well done. ~Live and Laugh~ The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you for the gift of your replies  Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, a perfect poem -- brava, brava! And, a keeper.  ....jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
feeling this. beautiful |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
"I throw up my hands In pleading supplication And you reach for me Pulling me safe Into the arms of your love" It can be hard sometimes to just give up, and hope that someone is there to help/hold/rescue us. Will we ever truely get to that point? I doubt it, it usually comes from being done, and we are lucky that we are being watched,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
oh how i loved this! thank you for the smile. take care, amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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